Lines 1-4
In these lines the speaker of the poem uses a simile to compare her
young friend to "a young beech tree." Beeches are singularly attractive
and rare trees as they grow only in fertile soil. In the United States
beech trees were mostly destroyed by settlers who cut them down to clear
farmland. Thus the poem suggests the rare beauty and character of the
friend through this simple allusion. That the friend is both "straight and
swaying" suggests then an interesting paradox in character. It would seem
that the friend is both genuinely true to her convictions yet
simultaneously capable of being flexible. If we assume that the young
friend being described is, like the speaker of the poem, a poet (an
interpretation which adds another level of meaning to the poem) then we
might read this line to suggest that she is not particularly "set" in her
poetic ways. Instead the friend is young enough, and perhaps inexperienced
enough, to be able to change poetic modes on command. Note the
alliteration of "s" sounds in line three and how this repetition of sound
adds to the musical quality of these lines. Also, note the "golden leaves"
of the beech tree. References to "gold" in poetry traditionally suggest
value and/or worth. In this case, however, it is important to remember
that beech trees turn gold only in autumn, which would seem to suggest
that while this friend is "young" compared to the speaker of the poem, she
is not necessarily young by traditional standards. Indeed, the friend
would appear to be in the autumn of life, suggesting late middle age.
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Lines 5-6
These lines then introduce another simile in which the speaker compares
the young friend's "walk" to the "blowing of a beech-tree/on a hill."
Implied is the majesty of this tree as seen from a distance, and the awe
the tree inspires as the wind bends it violently back and forth. We
presume, of course, that the entire tree does not move, but rather only
its upper extremities. In other words, the tree is flexible but well
rooted.
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Lines 7-8
These lines introduce yet another simile. Here the speaker of the poem
compares her friend's "voice" to the sounds of leaves being rustled in the
wind. The alliteration of "s" sounds in these lines then serves to
reinforce for the reader the sound made by wind through leaves. Notice,
however, the use of the word "struck" in line 8. This would seem to
suggest that the wind plays the tree like an instrument, the connotations
of the word "struck" being associated as they are with striking keys of a
piano or striking a chord. As well, the speaker is once again both
implying the friend's ability to adapt and, perhaps more to the point, her
fickleness. This reading makes particular sense when we note that the
speaker of the poem seems to suggest that the friend is being "struck" by
a "South wind" which is to say a warm, tropical wind as opposed to a cold
biting northerly wind. Regardless, the inconstancy implied by the image of
the ever-swaying beech is central to the larger meaning of the poem as
much as is the friend's flexibility and adaptability. As well, the
allusion to the sound of wind blowing through trees is common in many
Japanese haiku and serves to add a sense of focus and clarity to the poem,
a sense of poetic tradition. Finally, this aural image foreshadows the
very haiku-like end of the poem, wherein the speaker makes much more
economical use of language to describe herself in comparison to the friend
she describes here.
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Line 9
Here the poem breaks away from the pattern of similes it has engaged
thus far and shifts instead to a metaphoric description of the young
friend's shadow. This is a particularly interesting line when we consider
what having or not having a shadow implies as far as the weight or
thinness of the thing or person being described. In brief, to say that
something, or as in this case, someone, has no shadow, is to suggest that
they lack substance. It is almost as if the poet were saying that this
friend were negligible or invisible. On the other hand, the image of
"scattered sunshine" is in itself quite breathtaking and beautiful, so to
argue with any force that the speaker of the poem is trying to degrade or
"put down" her friend would not seem wholly justified. We might even read
this as a point of great admiration. The speaker may well be suggesting
that the young friend is pleasantly not so full of herself or egocentric.
This may seem a bit of a stretch, but imagistic poems such as this depend
almost entirely on the reader to develop or assert the relationships
between the things being depicted. In other words, we may be supplied with
the central image or images, but it is up to us and our creativity to
derive the larger range of meaning being implied.
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Lines 10-11
Here the speaker of the poem describes the young friend's essentially
romantic relationship with the world. Implied is a failure to deal with
the world on its own terms. Instead the friend would deign to alter
universal laws, an act which implies an intense egocentrism, a wayward
self- importance. Conversely we might take these lines to suggest the
young friend's naivete and innocence: the stars serving as a blanket for
this sleeping child. Read in this manner, we might even suggest that the
friend is "in tune" with the natural world, that he or she is at ease with
these natural surroundings. This point is somewhat ambiguous until we get
to the second stanza of the poem, wherein the comparison made between the
speaker and the friend seems to more clearly suggest that indeed the
friend is somehow sheltered and naive.
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Line 12
In this stanza the speaker finally introduces herself into the poem.
Returning to the pattern of simile used earlier in the poem, she compares
herself to a "great oak" and appears to assert her superior size and
strength as compared to the younger beech, which is only a "stem" by
comparison. Oaks are much more plentiful in the United States than are
beeches and while not considered particularly graceful, they are valued
for their sturdiness and for their usefulness in building. Thus the
speaker of the poem seems to suggest her ruggedness and usefulness. The
sky, as described in this line, differs greatly from the sky described in
line 10. This would seem to suggest a difference in perception. Whereas
the young friend desires to "pull the sky down" and cloak herself in the
light of the stars, the speaker recognizes the grayness of the sky which
suggests impending doom, be it a great storm or the coming of winter with
its shorter and shorter days. Whether the result of their differing ages
or their differing perceptions and characters, what is clear is that they
do not see the world in the same light. Implied as well, by the speaker's
use of "great" in describing herself, is that she is ultimately superior
to her younger friend. The speaker seems to believe she sees the world
more realistically. The poem alludes to the age old conflict between
"idealistic youth" and "cynical old-age."
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Line 13
The poem concludes by placing in relation the two images developed so
far in the poem: the oak and the beech. What we recognize is that the oak
towers over the beech, suggesting again the oak's overall superiority. Yet
we must not forget that being older means the oak is likely closer to
death. The beech then may eventually subsume its position and grandeur.
Regardless, it would seem that there is competition inherent in the scene
as its been depicted. The two trees, the two friends, must ultimately
compete for the same resources. On the other hand, we might imagine that
the great oak in some way shelters the small beech and makes its survival
possible. If this is the case then we might argue that the speaker is
looking down upon her young ward with motherly fondness. If again, we
choose to think of the friend and the speaker as both being poets, we
might consider each to be representative of separate poetic "generations."
It could be then either that they are competing for literary success or
that the older speaker is looking on with fondness as her young student
grows as a poet. Finally, it is interesting to imagine that the young poet
is actually the speaker herself or at least the speaker's memory of her
younger self. In this manner, we might imagine her looking back at her own
youthful ruminations with both embarrassment and longing. As well, the
structural and thematic developments of the poem would then suggest the
speaker's journey toward poetic maturity. If we contrast the first stanza
of the poem (the young poet) with the second stanza of the poem (the older
poet), what we notice stylistically is that the second stanza is much more
economical in its use of language and much less romantic about the world.
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Source: Exploring Poetry, Gale, 1997.